Spielbeschreibung < Korrekturlesen < Englisch < Sprachen < Vorhilfe
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(Frage) beantwortet  | | Datum: | 17:33 Mi 06.05.2009 | | Autor: | DommeV |
| Aufgabe | | Beschreibe ein Spiel für Kinder auf Englisch |
Hallo, ich musste ein Spiel beschreiben, würde mich freuen wenn da jemand guckt ob da Fehler drin sind. Gerne hätte ich auch ein Feedback, ob es verständlich ist.
Danke schonmal hier mein Text:
Pillowrace
Material: Two Pillows
Pillowrace is a competition game for a group with many children. First of all, the children make a circle with chairs. There are two teams with equal numbers of children in the game, but it is not necessary to build groups. It is very easy: The neighbors of each child are in the other group, so every child just has to keep in mind that its second neighbors are in its team. You can count 12121212
. to clarify that.
After that you can give out the pillows. It is necessary, that every group has a pillow and that one pillow is on the top of the circle, another at the bottom.
Then the race can begin. The children, who have the pillows, give them clockwise to their second neighbor and so on. That has to be as fast as possible. The game is over when a pillow overtakes the other, so that the overtaking team wins the race.
Difficulty Level 2:
To raise up the difficulty, you can allow the teams to interfere the other group in hand over the pillow, by extend the arm or something else.
Easy Mode:
The two teams stand in two lines and they give the pillows to the next child behind him and the team, who is faster wins.
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(Antwort) fertig  | | Datum: | 20:51 Mi 06.05.2009 | | Autor: | mmhkt |
Guten Abend,
ich weiß jetzt wie's geht - das Spiel nämlich!
Eine Anmerkung zum Text:
"den Arm ausstrecken" würde ich nicht mit "extend" beschreiben, dazu passte eher "reach out" oder "stretch out".
Also in dem Fall:
[...]by reaching/stretching out the arm[...]
Ansonsten erscheint mir der Text verständlich und korrekt.
Schönen Abend
mmhkt
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