Falsche Sätze korrigieren < Sonstiges (Englisch) < Englisch < Sprachen < Vorhilfe
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| Aufgabe | | 7) Arguments witsh are justifying slvery in the text ,,The Debate About Slavery" from Edward Ranson and Andrew Hook are that the realtionship between the slave-holders and the slaves was paternal and that the live of the slaves was better in the South than in Africa(1.10f). |
Hallo,
ich habe eine Englisch-Klausur geschrieben und mein Lehrer hat mir/uns einige Sätze der Schüler gegeben,die wir korrigieren müssen.
Mein korrigierter Satz:
Arguments wich are justifying slavery in the text ,,The Debate About Slavery" from Edward Ranson and Andrew Hook are that the slave-owners and the slaves were paternal and that the life of the were better in the South than in Africa (p.1, line 10f.).
Wenn ihr weitere Korrekturen an dem Satz habt, bitte schreiben.
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Arguments wich are justifying slavery in the text ,,The Debate About Slavery" from Edward Ranson and Andrew Hook are that the slave-owners and the slaves were paternal and that the life of the were better in the South than in Africa (p.1, line 10f.
Ich würde das so schreiben:
The prostheses of the text "The Debate About Slavery" from Edward Ranson and Andrew Hook: "Slave-owners and the slaves were paternal" and "The life of them was better in the South than in Africa" are arguments, which justify slavery .
Ob dein Satz Sinn ergibt, ist die andere Frage.
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